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Malek Deneith

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Doomprayer
« on: December 13, 2007, 18:15 »

So me and my friend (EDIT much, much later - said friend was Xander Morhaime, at that time not a member of this forums), whom I got addicted to DoomRL lately, were talking about how he should run through required AoB levels for the sergeant rank. At one moment he said "And lets pray that RNG will be mercifull" and than followed with "Give us today our daily double shotgun.". In a flash of insight I replied with "And deliver us from Arch-Viles.".

And thus those two lines started an idea to make whole Doom prayer. For your amusment I present the results below (both in original polish version for those few that can understand it and in english version for those that don't).

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Polski
RNG nasz, któryś jest w kodzie,
święć się seedy twoje,
Przyjdź RandomMap twoje,
Bądź generacjo twoja,
Jako w ADOMie, tak i w DoomRL.
Shotguna naszego, dwulufowego, daj nam dzisiaj.
I daruj nam nasze save'y,
jako i my darujemy nasze YASD.
I nie wódź nas do Mortuary,
Ale nas zbaw od Arch-Vile'i.
Bo twoje są Rougelike'i,
I DoomGuy, i Demony na wieki.
Amen.

English
Our RNG in code,
Hallowed be your seed.
Your RandomMap come,
Your generation be done,
On DoomRL, as it is in ADOM.
Give us this day our daily double shotgun,
And forgive us our saves,
As we forgive those who YASD.
Lead us not into the Mortuary,
But deliver us from Arch-Viles.
For thine is the Rougelike,
The DoomGuy, and the Demons forever.
Amen.

If you have any suggestions for improvment feel free to tell them ;P

[EDIT] Added RickVoid's suggestions. The polish line about YASD has a little bit diffrent meaning now, but it was impossible to adjust it without making it sound wierd.
« Last Edit: October 27, 2012, 13:14 by Malek Deneith »
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #1 on: December 13, 2007, 21:07 »

OMFG! :DDDD
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #2 on: December 14, 2007, 07:23 »

LOL'd... !
"I nie wódź nas do Mortuary..."

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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #3 on: December 14, 2007, 11:43 »

t3h lolz :D
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #4 on: December 15, 2007, 11:27 »

*snerk*

That was friggen hilarious, and is totally getting saved. XD
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #5 on: December 16, 2007, 05:02 »

You are my new hero.
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #6 on: December 19, 2007, 19:24 »

The best part is the bilingual aspect - does it flow as nicely in Polish as it does in English? Anyway, very nice =D
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #7 on: December 20, 2007, 02:26 »

Actuall I think that it flows a little bit better in Polish than in English, as it was made in polish first and then translated to english :)
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #8 on: December 20, 2007, 10:54 »

Actually, it's missing a line, now that I can read it without falling off my chair.

in between "and deliver us from Archviles" and "Amen" should be a take off "For thine is the kingdom, the power, and the glory forever."

My submission: "For thine is the Roguelike, the DoomGuy, and the Demons forever."

*Edit*
Since English is my first language, I cleaned up the English version so that it more closely resembles that version of the same Prayer. Here it is:

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Our RNG in code,
Hallowed be your seed.
Your RandomMap come,
Your generation be done,
On DoomRL, as it is in ADOM.
Give us this day our daily double shotgun,
And forgive us our saves,
As we forgive those who YASD.
Save us from trial of Mortuary,
And deliver us from Arch-Viles.
For thine is the Roguelike,
The DoomGuy, and the Demons forever.
Amen.

*EDIT!!!(again)*
Okay, I've been sitting here trying to remember the original prayer, this is what I remember:
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So the prayer should look like:
Spoiler (click to show/hide)

Anyone who is offended by the prayer I posted, apologies. But at least I put it in spoiler tags. :)

A final Edit, because it's a Roguelike, not a Rougelike. :(
« Last Edit: December 20, 2007, 18:39 by RickVoid »
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #9 on: December 20, 2007, 14:54 »

Yessss, we knew about that line, but since it isn't always used, and we were pretty much out of ideas, we decided to skip it.

As for the the submission I like it - I'll edit the first pot to include it (and polish version) after my meal :)
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #10 on: December 20, 2007, 18:36 »

:)
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #11 on: December 21, 2007, 07:40 »

Well, never heard of that line (being included in Our Father, that is). But Doomprayer sounds much better including it.

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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #12 on: December 23, 2007, 08:20 »

Wanna try with Latin version?

Latin Translation (Vulgata)

Pater Noster qui es in caelis:
sanctifictur Nomen Tuum;
advniat Regnum Tuum;
fiat volntas Tua,
sicut in caelo, et in terra.
Panem nostrum
cotidinum da nobis hdie;
et dimtte nobis dbita nostra,
sicut et nos
dimittimus debitribus nostris;
et ne nos indcas in tentatinem;
sed lbera nos a Malo.
Amen.

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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #13 on: August 31, 2009, 16:56 »

I think I have finally found a religion I want to be a part of :)
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Re: Doomprayer
« Reply #14 on: September 09, 2009, 11:50 »

Onze RNG in code,
Geheiligd zij uw seed.
Uw WillekeurigeMap kome,
U wil geschiede,
Over DoomRL, als in ADOM.
Geef ons heden onze dagelijks dubbele shotgun,
En vergeef ons onze saves,
Gelijk ook wij vergeven aan zij die YASD.
Leid ons niet naar de Mortuary,
Maar verlos ons van de Arch-Viles.
In de naam van de Rougelike,
De DoomGuy, en de Demons.
Amen.

(That's Dutch... Not that anybody would care :p)
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