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LuckyDee:
Found a Shielded Armor for the first time. Description reads:

"While it is massive, you no longer fear the little ones."

While should be replaced by since or something along those lines.

thelaptop:
Danke.  I've rephrased it a little.

LuckyDee:

--- Quote from: thelaptop on November 14, 2013, 18:35 ---Danke.
--- End quote ---

Funny choice of words: I actually had to look up 'while' in the dictionary to be sure of myself, since the German 'weil' would mean exactly the right thing :)

Tormuse:
A couple of old ones that have been there for a while:

In the mortem, it says "sacrificed itself for the good of mankind."  It should be "themselves" or maybe "himself" if there is just one person.

Also, "showed that it can outsmart Hell itself."  It should be "showed that they can outsmart Hell itself."  (or "he" in the place of "they" if it's just one person)

In conclusion, you don't call people "it."  :)

thelaptop:

--- Quote from: Tormuse on November 15, 2013, 13:47 ---In conclusion, you don't call people "it."  :)

--- End quote ---
Sure.  But we're talking about souls, not people.  Souls ain't people.

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