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Solarn:

--- Quote from: s0ulman on May 21, 2011, 08:42 ---Upon entering The Mortuary it says: "Can this be real?? The floor is is covered by blood..."

Moreover, I think it should be "covered with blood".

--- End quote ---
"Covered in blood" would be even better.

thelaptop:

--- Quote from: Solarn on July 04, 2011, 02:37 ---"Covered in blood" would be even better.

--- End quote ---
Or "Can this be real?? This is one bloody floor..."

Ander Hammer:
Bullet Dance:

Righteousness -- and superior firepower -- has triumphed!"

Missing the first quotation mark.

Rocket Box:

"Now this is REAL 'boombox'!"

should be

"Now this is a REAL 'boombox'!"

10mm Ammo Chain:

"That reminds you about action films you've seen long ago."

might be better as

"This reminds you of an action film you saw a long time ago."

gilgatex:
It says "You have no armor that needs repairing".  It should be "Your equipped armor does not need repairing". 

I do have armor that needs repairing.  It's just not equipped :)  So technically the first statement is incorrect.

drugon:
Just completed 0.9.9.4. In post mortem it's written: "1 souls destroyed the Cyberdemon..." It should be: "1 soul destroyed the Cyberdemon..."

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