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Shinji_Ikari_9th:
--- Quote from: thelaptop on September 03, 2015, 18:58 ---This guy's grin and eyes are terrifying. O.O
Also, assuming that the top is the barrel and the bottom some kind of light source, you may be missing a bullet and/or depth for the barrel itself. =)
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Funny that you should comment on the lack of DOF on the last render laptop, that's the theme for this month's contest. Typing of that, I'm bummed to type that I've been out-rendered yet again.
Here's what I entered last month.
A nod to those who serve in the National Guard, as well as my late father who'd have been 62 last month and had been a guardsman himself.
(To any of my followers who serve or have served, I salute you in thanks.)
Shinji_Ikari_9th:
Just a heads up, this month's contest is almost at a close and I'm finding it a pain in the rear getting my DoF right. Ether everything is blury or it's all in focus. Wish me luck guys.
Shinji_Ikari_9th:
Managed to get my F%#$%^ing DoF working and made my entry official today. Time will tell if I'll be out rendered once more, or if I'll be in the top three.
Here's something that I did between messes with my entry.
and a variant of above,
Shinji_Ikari_9th:
Was out rendered once more last month, but I learned quite a bit about using DoF, so I'll probably start to use it more around here. Here's my entry BTW.
thelaptop:
Ooo... shiny!
I think shadows are your weak points. With many of your renders, you often have more than one light source, but the shadows don't seem to match up well.
Sometimes when I look at a render, my eyes detect that something is "missing" when my brain cannot really say why.
But... don't be discouraged! I still like your renders! They have a tendency to play with space a lot -- contrasting between narrow spaces with the wide in a way that is terrifying/dynamic. =D
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