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[OOC Thread] The Lesser of Two Heresies.
Sylith:
--- Quote from: LuckyDee ---
--- Quote from: Silharr ---"Everybody in this village is someone looking at they don't take kindly"
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should read "Everybody in this village looks like someone they don't take kindly to"
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Or maybe just...
"Looking at everybody in this village is not the thing they take kindly"? [I know, "something" would be better, but I want to point this out.]
LuckyDee:
I understand where you're going, but in this case it doesn't make sense: the person(s) 'looking' are the same as the person(s) 'not taking kindly', which implies they're taking offense at something they are doing themselves. Or taking offense at 'being forced to look at a mutant' instead of simply 'seeing one'. It's a fine line, mind you.
I have/had no intention of turning this into English 101, but in this case I simply wasn't sure of what was being said, so I rewrote the grey bits the way I thought they'd add up with what I expected the post to understand.
Klear:
--- Quote from: Silhar on July 07, 2012, 16:02 ---Hey guys, is anybody into this webcomic by chance?
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Crap. I've finished it already. How often does that update? I hope it's more often than... holy shit! Gone with the Blastwave has a new update!
Silhar:
SotI updates every sunday, as far as I am concerned. Unless the author gets struck by OH HELL I'M SO LAZY.
HexaDoken:
Departing right now. Will be back in a week or so. If something really important happens, feel free to knock my character uncoscious so he isn't staying right there like a zombie.
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