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Valkeera:
--- Quote from: TFoN on December 29, 2006, 13:03 ---Just in case someone hasn't done a full win yet.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)Ah, this reminds me - after killing JC there's some text, and it contains "souls" where it should be "soul" ("your souls rests at last" or something like that).
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Spoiler (click to show/hide)I always thought that this means all the unfortunate souls of your marines that succumbed to Hell before you managed to defeat JC... But the sentence has a minor flaw nevertheless, if the souls are indeed souls, it should read "your souls rest at last..."
TFoN:
--- Quote from: Valkeera on December 29, 2006, 13:25 ---
--- Quote from: TFoN on December 29, 2006, 13:03 ---Just in case someone hasn't done a full win yet.
Spoiler (click to show/hide)Ah, this reminds me - after killing JC there's some text, and it contains "souls" where it should be "soul" ("your souls rests at last" or something like that).
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Spoiler (click to show/hide)I always thought that this means all the unfortunate souls of your marines that succumbed to Hell before you managed to defeat JC... But the sentence has a minor flaw nevertheless, if the souls are indeed souls, it should read "your souls rest at last..."
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Spoiler (click to show/hide)Exactly :)
And this Spoiler (click to show/hide) thing's getting out of hand :P
Valkeera:
I suggest dropping the spoiler thing in Bug Reports and RFFs altogether - everybody who needs to submit a bug or is so daring to submit an RFF has to be spoiled through and through 8-)
Derek:
--- Quote from: DaEezT on December 29, 2006, 12:57 ---
--- Quote from: Valkeera on December 29, 2006, 12:53 ---Just remembered a typo in post mortem text at the bottom:
"Some rumours, though, say that the CD was killed already!" - I think there is a missing comma before 'though'; I put it in bold.
EDIT: For better visibility, I put it in red bold :-)
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Hum, I don't think you need any commas in that sentence ?:o
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The commas are needed, although the entire sentence is a bit awkward. Maybe:
"Some rumors, however, suggest that the Cyberdemon was already killed!"
Derek:
--- Quote ---2 showed that it can outsmart hell itself.
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From one of Blade's postmortems. Would read better as:
"2 showed that they can outsmart hell itself."
or
"1 showed that he can outsmart hell itself."
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