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Ugm:
Use Polish demon! :> Cybernetyczny demon, yeah :P

Santiago Zapata:
wait! I always thought it was meant to be the cyberdeamon! :P

Styro:
Here a few more I have found.

1. In the Angel of Impatience description:

 You need to kill now! No time to carry
 all those medkits and phase devices,
 you use them immidately at pickup!

Should be immediately.


2. The text when your player rank increases is a little awkward.

You have amazing skill and advanced
to Captain rank!

It should probably be changed to:

You have amazing skill and advance
to Captain rank!

-or-

You have amazing skill and have
advanced to Captain rank!


3. In the Angel of Purity description:

Who needs thiose powerups anyway?

Should be those.


4. The Angel of Haste description has an awkward sentance.

DoomRL is too long, you want to fight
your way through, as fast as possible.

It should probably be:

DoomRL is too long. You want to fight
your way through as fast as possible.

Valkeera:
There's also a brutal typo on the initial screen - big, flashing red "Challange modes!" instead of Challenge modes. Though I suppose you know about that one already ;-)

As for the naming convention... I've always liked DoomRL most.

Styro:
The credits page has a line that is too long.

Jorge Alonso, and Turgor for providing valuable ideas the new release of DoomR

Could be:
Jorge Alonso, and Turgor for providing valuable ideas included in the new
release of DoomRL.

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