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Author Topic: Some stuff i played in studio.  (Read 3930 times)

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Some stuff i played in studio.
« on: January 25, 2007, 17:44 »

Hey guys. I had practics in some school's studio a while ago and i wrote a 5 minute track for this purpouse. Here it is :
 http://www.megaupload.com/?d=TEXO04PR

Any Feedback?
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Re: Some stuff i played in studio.
« Reply #1 on: January 26, 2007, 09:52 »

Can i ask you to upload it into another file-sharing system, which is not permanently bisy for my country?)) Rapidshare, for example?
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Re: Some stuff i played in studio.
« Reply #2 on: January 26, 2007, 12:13 »

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Re: Some stuff i played in studio.
« Reply #3 on: January 26, 2007, 16:35 »

Not bad, but I feel it lacks some kind of main-theme - there is no distinctive melody to hum along... but maybe that was intended. Anyway, such melodies make people cpme back to a song, so maybe you should think about it ;].

Yet, don't take this advice to seriously tough, for it comes from someone who has Beethovens' 5th and 9th Symphony, and classical music movie scores, along with Rammstein and a lot of J-Pop on his Winamp playlist xD.

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Re: Some stuff i played in studio.
« Reply #4 on: January 26, 2007, 16:45 »

You may be right, though I don't think that it is not interesting. I think there are some very good parts and some pretty bad parts.

If I had more time, I would mix it alone and I think this would help, because right now the 2 solos in the beginning and in the end are way too loud.
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