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Typos
Valkeera:
DoomRL is still plagued by several typos in text messages. Help catch those little bugs and smash them!
Several examples:
AoI challenge, when picking / using a medpac:
"You use a small med-pack immidately. You feel healed"
Correctly:
"You use the small med-pack immediately. You feel healed."
* * *
When the Cybie is defeated, in the winning message:
"After you defeat the Cyberdeamon..."
Correctly:
"After you defeat the Cyberdemon..."
DaEezT:
Styro also posted quite a few spelling & grammar mistakes over in the beta board so expect the next version to be less brutal with the English language ;D
Derek:
Great! :D
Yes, presentation is everything. The game should look as professional as possible by 1.0.0. That means no typos and consistency with naming. i.e. it must be decided whether it's "Doom Roguelike," "Doom: The Roguelike," "Doom the Roguelike," or some other variant. Same goes with "DoomRL," "DOOMRL," or "Doom RL..."
Here are Styro's finds from the other thread:
--- Quote ---In the description for Badass, it has the following:
"deplete more slowly for you.Even more,"
To be consistent, there should be a space between "you." and "Even", like "you. Even"
--- End quote ---
--- Quote ---OK, here's another one. ;)
There's the smell of blood in thy air!
The word "thy" should just be "the". "Thy" is a possessive, so it is like saying "your air".
Out of curiousity, is there any chance of finding an Advanced Combat Knife? I suppose you could only add speed and damage mods (just llike you can't add capacity to the rocket launcher), but it would make for an interesting challenge. That makes me wonder about dual-wielding Advanced Combat Knives...
--- End quote ---
Kornel Kisielewicz:
Styro's ones have already been fixed. Valkeera, I also fixed the ones you posted now. Thank you, and report all that you can hunt down! :D
Derek, as for the naming convention, I have no idea :D. I guess I'll leave that for a poll in some time :].
That damn CyberdeAmon has been hunting me in various places since 0.9.5 ^_^
DaEezT:
--- Quote from: Kornel Kisielewicz on December 21, 2006, 19:09 ---That damn CyberdeAmon has been hunting me in various places since 0.9.5 ^_^
--- End quote ---
Now the question is whether to use real English (daemon) or pseudo English (demon) :p
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